Wherever you are

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by BeautyQueen (Veteran Zoner) on Sunday, 16-Apr-2006 20:00:24

Hi yall; I have just decide to write something on writers' block because some of you would like to hear it. I'm going to write a poem called, "Wherever You Are" So check it out!
I wanna be wherever you are
Whether you're near of far
It's really doesn't matter
Because our love has scattered

Let us talk to each other over the phone
Let us never walk alone
Let us be together forever
And leave each other never
Let us do all these things
For they seem so right

I hope you can understand this poem.
ther a stare

Post 2 by chelslicious (like it or not, I'm gonna say what I mean. all the time.) on Sunday, 16-Apr-2006 20:10:29

awww, i like it girl! keep up da great work!

Post 3 by BeautyQueen (Veteran Zoner) on Sunday, 16-Apr-2006 20:16:59

Thanks. I made some mistakes, and I try to fix them, but my computer was acting really stupid. So if there's anything misspelled or if words aren't where they need to be it's because of that. I apologize.

Post 4 by Grace (I've now got the ggold prolific poster award! wahoo! well done to me!) on Sunday, 16-Apr-2006 22:26:23

Dear Li’l Kimmy,

Post 5 by BeautyQueen (Veteran Zoner) on Sunday, 16-Apr-2006 22:34:06

Thanks so much; I needed that.

Post 6 by Pink Pineapple (Veteran Zoner) on Monday, 17-Apr-2006 2:24:27

Hey girl, don't worry about the mistakes it's understandible and that's what matters. I really love it you should write more.

Post 7 by blbobby (Ooo you're gona like this!) on Monday, 17-Apr-2006 5:27:44

This is a beautiful, intense poem that expresses a lot of feeling in a few words.

I hope we hear a lot more from you, keep up the good work.

Bob

Post 8 by BeautyQueen (Veteran Zoner) on Tuesday, 18-Apr-2006 15:22:11

Thank yall so much; I really appreciate this. I will post more.

Post 9 by saiyan4414 (the Zone BBS remains forever my home page) on Tuesday, 18-Apr-2006 15:35:14

Great poem, keep it up.

Post 10 by HauntedReverie (doing the bad mango) on Friday, 28-Apr-2006 18:40:06

Your mistakes don't matter Daria, the message does. I liked the poem and the message it conveyed. In those few words, you expressed so much and I really hope to see more work from you girl. I like it